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kQCMXcZfP6za9ePCxwbJG5O893if9HVK1gTy04DSDsfRxLn4
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WEB SCORE: 2.33
Opening Section – 2
Concept Explained – 3
Language – 2
The opening section could be shortened. Currently it consists of a very general description of an ICO followed by a video on the same subject, followed by a slightly more detailed explanation that repeats the same things. It would've been better to start with a clear and snappy statement that answers the questions "who is this for?" and "why should I consider an ICO on TON and not the other networks?" Texts on the page could benefit from a thorough proofreading/spellcheck by a native speaker (bounty steaks?). After the opening, explanations become very technical – they could use an intermediate stage with some diagrams or other tools that make processing information easier.
VIDEO SCORE: 3.75
Narration – 4
Visualization – 4
Concept Explained – 1
Bonus: Language +0.5
Bonus: Soundtrack +0.25
Nice professional narration and cartoon animation. The story focuses on the concept of ICO, only briefly touches on the concept of "smart contract" – and never mentions this particular smart contract (except in the final frame) or why the viewer would want to run an ICO on TON and not on some other network in the first place (in particular doesn't mention any benefits one could get by having tokens on the TON Blockchain).
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Base Reward: EUR 4,500
OLD BUGS FIXED: 3/3
NEW ISSUES: N/A
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Total: EUR 4,500
Opening Section – 2
Concept Explained – 3
Language – 2
The opening section could be shortened. Currently it consists of a very general description of an ICO followed by a video on the same subject, followed by a slightly more detailed explanation that repeats the same things. It would've been better to start with a clear and snappy statement that answers the questions "who is this for?" and "why should I consider an ICO on TON and not the other networks?" Texts on the page could benefit from a thorough proofreading/spellcheck by a native speaker (bounty steaks?). After the opening, explanations become very technical – they could use an intermediate stage with some diagrams or other tools that make processing information easier.
VIDEO SCORE: 3.75
Narration – 4
Visualization – 4
Concept Explained – 1
Bonus: Language +0.5
Bonus: Soundtrack +0.25
Nice professional narration and cartoon animation. The story focuses on the concept of ICO, only briefly touches on the concept of "smart contract" – and never mentions this particular smart contract (except in the final frame) or why the viewer would want to run an ICO on TON and not on some other network in the first place (in particular doesn't mention any benefits one could get by having tokens on the TON Blockchain).
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Base Reward: EUR 4,500
OLD BUGS FIXED: 3/3
NEW ISSUES: N/A
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Total: EUR 4,500
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